POEM: For the abused women

Stop it, you’re hurting me is all u can say
When he hits you and just walks away
Then you sit and cry an wonder why
As you wipe the tears from your eye
It’s about time we stop this foolish crime
And break this rapid climb
Let us women take a stand
And stop men from lifting their right and left hand
We should come together and help our sisters
Those of them who are victims of abusers
So we could prevent them from getting hurt by these losers
Who constantly continue to give them blisters
Let us begin today
And maybe just one day, one day
All these abuse of women will soon go away

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6 Comments

  1. boooommmmmm
    May 30, 2011

    great jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. The Truth
    May 30, 2011

    Both men and woman are abused no one should take this none sense. Take it from me, anytime a man or woman abuse you physically just cut his/her hand and take it to the Police and indicate to them, I just cut off an abusers hand. Trust me this is my intention that’s why someone will never take the chance with me. In the begining of the relationship you must set the record straight, we too must be independent so we won’t have to depend on no one for a daily bread, work hard and God will do the rest. We have a bunch of jokers and losers not giving you a cent and want to abuse you. Nothing at all go so. If they hit you hit them back and be equal, bold and fairless…Jah Bless

  3. CaCa Chat La
    May 30, 2011

    i don’t think that it’s right
    i feel like it’s this stupid channel that i am watching
    I know for a fact it’s not always the men that abuse, it goes both ways
    but society will always see us in black light
    knowing that the American mentality is much like the women got all the rights
    even after the man work his entire life to put things in place at the end he was not appreciated for plus he is not matching up to the BOLD and BEAUTIFUL figure so we got problems
    And who knows some others woman might see what he want his wife to see but she listens to here friends and treat the poor man bad
    at the end the woman gets’ everything
    crappy system
    The sad part it’s man who made the system

    • real
      May 30, 2011

      Caca Chat la.

      That’s the point, the abusers always have an excuse for abusing.

      Of cause she has to get everything. it’s not the system that’s crappy;IT’S YOU ABUSERS THAT’S CRAPPY. weather she doesn’t see your point, or and you feels unappreciated, that does not give you any right to abuse her. If you’re not please with the way things are , where is your brain to discuss it respectfully and if it not working LEAVE.!!!!!
      What is sad about the men who made the system?….Thank God! they are men with a heart.
      Although the system is like this ,you all still abusing, much less papa….. what’s wrong with you men? !

      EVEN HAVE THE GUTTS TO COME HERE AND TALK ABOUT YOUR RIGHTS TO ABUSE, AND IF SHE FINDS HER FRIENDS MAKE MORE SENSE TO HER? THAT’S HER RIGHTS .SHE IS AN ADULT FREE TO AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH YOU. IS THIS A REASON TO BEAT HER UP?
      SO BECAUSE YOU WORK HARD AND PUT THINGS IN PLACE SHE HAS TO BE YOUR MAT?
      RESPECT BEGETS RESPECT. IT’S TIME YOU MEN LEARN WHAT LOVE IS !

  4. DA gurl
    May 30, 2011

    Good Job!

  5. Aha
    May 30, 2011

    That’s nice

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