POEM: Note from a pretty girl

Rachel Registe - Monday, April 23rd, 2012 at 6:35 AM
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I wish you’d look beyond my pretty face

—-far past the beautiful eyes,

dig deep into my soul

to

find out what makes me laugh

and

Discover what makes me cry

so

that you know just what to say

when

tears fill my eyes,

those beautiful eyes.

I wish you’d look at my curves

not with lust

but rather

see them as the bumps I’ve been through–

in life

and as you can see

there are many…

…pain

…obstacles.

…disappointments

but all you see are those hips,

those lips ..

they’ve got so much to say

but you’re so enchanted by

those curves..

that sway

I ask that you see me

and not the skin I’m wrapped up in

that soft smooth skin

and you’ll see that I’m even more beautiful

within.

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13 Comments

  1. Philbert George
    April 30, 2012

    Beautiful…

  2. Toosense
    April 24, 2012

    beautiful. just love those words.

  3. watcher
    April 24, 2012

    :-D two thumbs up :-D

  4. DOMINICA
    April 24, 2012

    Oh God i almost cry good job

  5. Mix
    April 23, 2012

    Nice work

  6. fair game
    April 23, 2012

    know that feeling all too well…nicely put.

  7. Anonymous
    April 23, 2012

    Thanks Everyone! I really appreciate the comments!! I will be posting more. :)

  8. Luv this
    April 23, 2012

    Isn’t this just the a lovely and well written poem?! Aww how sweet!

  9. believer
    April 23, 2012

    Poignant, moving, touching…lovely poem

    keep up the high standard.

  10. ss
    April 23, 2012

    Very nice one Rachel… i enjoyed it.. :)

  11. dominican/road
    April 23, 2012

    i love that poem

  12. well sah
    April 23, 2012

    love this poem excellent job!

  13. Igloo
    April 23, 2012

    I like this. Miss Registe look forward to reading more of your poems.

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