POEM: Note from a pretty girl

Rachel Registe - Monday, April 23rd, 2012 at 6:35 AM
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I wish you’d look beyond my pretty face

—-far past the beautiful eyes,

dig deep into my soul

to

find out what makes me laugh

and

Discover what makes me cry

so

that you know just what to say

when

tears fill my eyes,

those beautiful eyes.

I wish you’d look at my curves

not with lust

but rather

see them as the bumps I’ve been through–

in life

and as you can see

there are many…

…pain

…obstacles.

…disappointments

but all you see are those hips,

those lips ..

they’ve got so much to say

but you’re so enchanted by

those curves..

that sway

I ask that you see me

and not the skin I’m wrapped up in

that soft smooth skin

and you’ll see that I’m even more beautiful

within.

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13 Comments

  1. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 Philbert George April 30, 2012

    Beautiful…

  2. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 Toosense April 24, 2012

    beautiful. just love those words.

  3. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 watcher April 24, 2012

    :-D two thumbs up :-D

  4. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 DOMINICA April 24, 2012

    Oh God i almost cry good job

  5. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 Mix April 23, 2012

    Nice work

  6. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 1 Thumb down 0 fair game April 23, 2012

    know that feeling all too well…nicely put.

  7. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 0 Thumb down 0 Anonymous April 23, 2012

    Thanks Everyone! I really appreciate the comments!! I will be posting more. :)

  8. Well-loved. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 4 Thumb down 0 Luv this April 23, 2012

    Isn’t this just the a lovely and well written poem?! Aww how sweet!

  9. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 3 Thumb down 0 believer April 23, 2012

    Poignant, moving, touching…lovely poem

    keep up the high standard.

  10. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 3 Thumb down 0 ss April 23, 2012

    Very nice one Rachel… i enjoyed it.. :)

  11. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 3 Thumb down 0 dominican/road April 23, 2012

    i love that poem

  12. Well-loved. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 10 Thumb down 0 well sah April 23, 2012

    love this poem excellent job!

  13. Well-loved. Like or Dislike: Thumb up 4 Thumb down 0 Igloo April 23, 2012

    I like this. Miss Registe look forward to reading more of your poems.

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