POEM: Rise woman rise

Blows on your tail,
But I love him
Curse words in your face
But I love him
Black and blue all over you
But still you love him.

Treated like dirt
But I love him
Cheating on you daily
But I love him
Not even the scent of his money
But still you love him

Waiting till you half dead
But I love him
A ring on your finger at the end
But I love him
With his heart somewhere else
But still you love him

Be wise oh woman, rise
Open up those weary eyes
Time for you to check your style
Since abuse and insult cannot be love
Turn around and yourself love

After it all he’ll still leave you
No matter what you say and do
To marry even your best friend too
Don’t take nonsense from any man
Because that is not in God’s plan.

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16 Comments

  1. hmmm
    May 20, 2011

    to love someone you to learn to love yourself , So try and love yourself first before you can say you love anyone , If a man love you , you will now for sure because he will show it and you will see it do not push him just let it flow. god bless you all

  2. girl p
    January 5, 2011

    love the poem. should be performed to get some women out there aware of the love life and what they should do. serves as an awakening call to every woman. :) :)

  3. Shanghai Girl
    December 17, 2010

    I Like this poem. Makes a lot of sense. Women need to have self-esteem. anyone who lets a man beat on them is lacking thereof. Learn to love yourself. The greatest love of all is self love.

  4. storm
    December 17, 2010

    Very good writing. Keep it up.

  5. Hey just giving my two cents
    December 16, 2010

    Wise and Truthful poem.

  6. Typical Dominican
    December 16, 2010

    Boyyyyyy that poem nice!
    Some woman just sorrrrrrrrrrtt….
    when will they see the light?????….smh

  7. justice 4 all
    December 16, 2010

    This poem is real, but some people view love as getting blows and (oh my god the make up)

  8. wikillee
    December 16, 2010

    Loves his best frien, but i love him

    They both hate you, but i love him

    Pics of her in his inbox, but i love him

    Pics of her in his phone, but i love him

    she’s his professor, but i love him

    She mad at you for marrying him, but i love him

    shit dat, i love Me more, i go horn on him :twisted:

  9. DA Niceness
    December 16, 2010

    If only We Women would Listen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. radix
    December 16, 2010

    young ones are following your works of poetry

  11. radix
    December 16, 2010

    continue your works the one ones are following you

  12. Anonymous
    December 16, 2010

    VERY NIICEE

  13. just saying
    December 16, 2010

    simple and to the point

  14. look drama
    December 16, 2010

    fire burn all the men who beat their women….

  15. kwamina
    December 16, 2010

    i love this

  16. Anonymous
    December 16, 2010

    I love this

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