POEM: Undefeated Love

Merfilius W. Leslie - Saturday, July 2nd, 2011 at 9:14 AM
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Tears freeze on my cheeks
My Heart sinks to my feet
This pain hasn’t left my soul for weeks
I’m scared cause I’m about to face ‘defeat’
I’ll take the blow to make revenge sweet
I’ll make the change, because I can’t be beat
Just a thought of another defeat, pulls blood to my skin
It forces me to try a lil harder, to say to myself, “I’ve got to win!”

Everything seems to slow down and my mind strays
The world disappears into nothing but a haze.
Things get more complicated and I’m lost in a maze.
My senses converge and I feel the ignition of an inner blaze
The only excuse I could give is “I’m going through a phase”
I don’t know what’s happening to me these last few days
But you give me the answer in so many ways
I have come to you, to ask for your help.

“Help me win this battle against myself”
Help me! Before this flame makes the rest of me melt
Cause my tears are defrosting and only you can relate to what I felt.
All the inward pain which I haven’t dealt
Resurfaces above my belt
They stifle me as they rise
Telling you I love you should be your Winning Prize…

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6 Comments

  1. $h3rn$
    July 3, 2011

    nice… :)

  2. life's great
    July 3, 2011

    Awwww baby I am so proud of you. That’s a real nice and deep poem continue doing ur thing my love.you are my creative star… We going up the scale.;)

  3. Anonymous
    July 3, 2011

    Awwww baby I am so proud of you. That’s a real nice and deep poem continue doing ur thing my love.you are my creative star… We going up the scale.;)

  4. Dominican
    July 3, 2011

    such a wonderful…poem…i love the build up….u love someone and u cant continue to suffocate ur emotions…best u jus surrender

  5. PAIN
    July 2, 2011

    I love this poem because it reminds me of my struggling home land, Dominica.

  6. miss*understood
    July 2, 2011

    great :-D
    :lol:
    :-P

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