POEM: Dear Madame

It is with honor I stand before you, to recite a letter on behalf of myself and my feelings true.
Last night in this very spot, I felt aching pain from a flying rock.
The thunder roared behind my ear, and so I could not resist and bear,
The pain which was bestowed upon me, by your one and only Son, Baloni.

I was raised to stand with pride and dignity.
Befriend my enemy, but stand as strong as a 10,000 man army!
I turned around while holding my head, the only thing though, thank God I wasn’t dead.
I looked upon your son Baloni, dear Madame; I wish he wasn’t so instantly lonely.

His friends began to flee like birds of a feather, when they saw my eyes they flocked away together.
Your son stood strong dear Madame, and he wasn’t afraid, of the massive monster I became.
The blood was rushing within my veins and so I couldn’t resist, someone had to be blamed!
He came to me with a dragons might, but before he could breathe I had struck him out of sight!

Upon the ground he laid, in pain, for so dear Madame you were too late.
You came hopping and leaping in mother’s delight, frightened because dear Baloni was just in a fight.
I will not beg and plead to his regime; for he brought it upon his self, such a dirty thing.
You see dear Madame, for my mother’s love; I have a reputation to uphold.

Whosoever disrespects me with anger; I will show them the love of a monster.
Dear Madame, please do not consider me though, a monster. It is not my place or love for such anger.
You son, Baloni must understand, that when he physically assault another,
he too dear Madame will be the victim of a raging thunder!

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9 Comments

  1. SHERVON
    May 13, 2011

    VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM

  2. M.Jacques
    May 4, 2011

    Well well well Baloni, your folly if not one to envy.

    This is a V- good piece! Nice work

  3. The messenger.
    May 4, 2011

    one bright day, in the middle of the night, two dead men; got up to fight, back to back they face each other, drew their swords to shoot each other, a deaf policeman, heard the noise he came and shot the two dead boys; what do you think i saw ‘ a lion made of straw eating stew potatoes raw. poem from space!!!!

  4. hold dem
    May 4, 2011

    well well well its original, great poem, I’ll give a golden drum award for that.

  5. ^_^
    May 4, 2011

    Awesome poem…tells a good ol’ WI childhood story! I luvz eeet!!

  6. checking in
    May 4, 2011

    trust you wi boy. but keep them coming none the less. :lol:

  7. really!!!
    May 4, 2011

    i love the story behind this poem> I find it quite amusing actually. Baloni has to take what he gets!!!!

  8. BABY LOVE
    May 4, 2011

    nicely written keep them coming props to you

  9. funnyface27
    May 4, 2011

    :lol: good one…so simple…so funny…

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