POEM: Sometimes We Fail

This poem is written by a mother especially to her children, inspired she says, by the Almighty Father. She’s a Dominican living in St. Lucia.

 

SOMETIMES WE FAIL

Sometimes we fail as parents,

To see the beauty of our children

Sometimes we fail as parents,

To see how wonderful they are

Sometimes we fail as parents,

To tell them how lovely they are.

Instead we compare,

We criticize,

We wish they were,

We see the negatives

Like the positive doesn’t exist.

 

But this mother’s day

I take the spotlight off me

And instead acknowledge you,

You my children,

To tell you

How much I love you,

To tell you

How wonderful you are,

To tell you

How proud I am of you,

To tell you my love has no nepotism

And most of all to tell you

How blessed I am to have children like you.

 

I love you dearly.

Copyright 2012 Dominica News Online, DURAVISION INC. All Rights Reserved. This material may not be published, broadcast, rewritten or distributed.

Disclaimer: The comments posted do not necessarily reflect the views of DominicaNewsOnline.com and its parent company or any individual staff member. All comments are posted subject to approval by DominicaNewsOnline.com. We never censor based on political or ideological points of view, but we do try to maintain a sensible balance between free speech and responsible moderating.

We will delete comments that:

  • contain any material which violates or infringes the rights of any person, are defamatory or harassing or are purely ad hominem attacks
  • a reasonable person would consider abusive or profane
  • contain material which violates or encourages others to violate any applicable law
  • promote prejudice or prejudicial hatred of any kind
  • refer to people arrested or charged with a crime as though they had been found guilty
  • contain links to "chain letters", pornographic or obscene movies or graphic images
  • are off-topic and/or excessively long

See our full comment/user policy/agreement.

13 Comments

  1. Rhona
    April 19, 2013

    This is a wonderful poem. A great acknowledgement to your children…words and thoughts we as parents should try to repeat with our own.
    Thank you, from one mother to another!

  2. :D
    May 14, 2012

    Loving this poem:D

  3. Ephnie Roberts-Lesmo
    May 14, 2012

    Thanks for all the lovely reviews/comments I have gotten thus far.

  4. Julius
    May 14, 2012

    Lovely poem Ephnie!!!

  5. Julius
    May 14, 2012

    Lovely poem Ephine. Keep them coming.

  6. Anonymous
    May 14, 2012

    Thanks mom, we love u 2. We appreciate all the sacrifices uve made for our sake.

  7. Brian Roberts
    May 14, 2012

    Lovely poem sis.

  8. Reader
    May 14, 2012

    No comments from Tiny????

    Beautiful poem!

  9. sandw
    May 14, 2012

    What a great poem. This should be placed in schools for more parents to read!

    I hate hearing parents criticise children – I am always hearing “you stupid”, “you ugly” “you greedy” either from parents, or children mimicking parents…..and the problem is that if you tell a child something enough times, he or she will start to believe it.

    Much better to praise our children, and let them believe they can be successful in whatever they want to be if they work at it.

    There are enough things holding children back in this country without the parents adding to the list.

    Thank you, Ephnie, for these lovely words.

  10. j
    May 14, 2012

    good vibez G

  11. DANZIGER
    May 13, 2012

    I love this peom Madame LESMOND, in reading I feel u love yr children you are number one.

  12. May 13, 2012

    I have to think that I failed from time to time as well.

    My son is now 31 years old; he is now living on his own–for the second time of his existence. He moved out when he was 23 years old, but by that time he still needed his mother’s love–so he moved back home with me in 2005. He left again in July 2011

    I can remember doing the best I could for his welfare, his comfort, and peace of mind, because I love him so much! However, somehow, if I go back to reminisce, I just know that I will find a flaw, to tell me: “you did not do your oughtmost best.

    I did not see him today, I can imagine all the reasons for that. None would have anything to do with our relationship–because he knows how much I love him. To God be the glory!

  13. ....
    May 13, 2012

    This is beautiful

Post a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

:) :-D :wink: :( 8-O :lol: :-| :cry: 8) :-? :-P :-x :?: :oops: :twisted: :mrgreen: more »

 characters available