POEM: The taste of pain is bitter tears

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The taste of pain is bitter tears
Her heart a square, my thoughts are round
In deep, so deep
Allay my fears
Reach out, smash out
My gutter sound,
Create for me an abyss
To drown my slicing cries
What hole is this to torture me
My tired soul yet flies,
His arms are shadows, wrapped around me
Taunting me his laugh,
Emotions comfort and then they flee
Away from his conscious wrath,
A tightly coiled snake up and strikes
Her venomous rage rampant
And poison tipped verbal spikes
Drove straight for my racing heart.
I sighed with pain and resignation,
As I accepted my fate.
Consumed with hate and alienation
I’ve chosen my mate


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  1. darkrise
    February 2, 2012

    :wink: awwww

  2. heres my taste of love
    January 4, 2011

    You never know what pain is till you get there

    These tears that I cry
    You won’t be able to fix them
    You’re the reason why I cry to be precise
    What would I do without you and why can’t I get you out of my head
    Why does it hurts so much even when I think it’s not right for loving you
    Where do I go from here knowing that you’re no longer in my world?
    I can’t believe all this time, all these years I’ve waited for some romantic guy to take me away in his arms
    It’s been decades now and I still haven’t found my true love

    What is love?
    Does love hurt and why would something as wonderful as love hurt?
    Hurt is pain and with pain comes anger.
    Life wasn’t meant to be this way.
    Who started this and how will it ever end?

    I need to know because I want to have a life with love and if love hurts then what good is it?
    Does anyone love me, does anyone care for me? Who’s listening to me and who cares about the way I feel?
    I am with God? I know the one and true person who loves me is God but sometimes I fail to understand his doing and I only see my reflection and I ignore his.

    I want to be that kind of person who falls in love completely and so my partner does the same infinite. Remember those days of falling in love and getting hurt, “Oh boy, that was painful”. And I’m still going through the same old thing.
    Hurt, hurt, hurt!

    Probably I’m leaving in a fairy tale, looking for that Cinderella romance. I wish to have that Cinderella romance but without that cruel step mom and step sister. Couldn’t face that cruelty. No matter how hard I try there’s always going to be pain in my life.

    Or can I change it? But how? Do you know?

    Email me on rastababy4u@hotmail.com.

  3. everton
    March 10, 2010

    yea real deep ali real deep………….
    lookin forward to another one

  4. Anonymous
    March 10, 2010

    wow now this is deep real deep….. i would just look @ u and wouldn’t say u was so deep nah
    i like real nice

  5. Big Poppa
    March 9, 2010

    Now it’s my turn to say W.O.W. The best poems, for my mind, are the tender and true.
    The elegance of this item is almost beyond compare. I do not puff hot air in complimenting this poem by a young beauty of a future, great writer/recorder.

  6. Dimitri
    March 9, 2010

    HMMMMM, it beats me now that I have read this piece; why is it this one you find to send to DNO first. Anyway, Nitara my take on this is Short, Sweet, and Sapient!

    Post more :) :) :) :)






  7. March 9, 2010

    very nice keep it up

  8. big d
    March 9, 2010

    very nice poem eep it on

  9. Janele
    March 9, 2010

    Lovely Poem……I feel like u reading my mind….cuz thats just how i feeling…God Job Sis!!!!!!

  10. hagana
    March 9, 2010

    hey sis that was amazing….soo true too i felt like it was me..keep it up grl..doin big tings..

  11. shelly
    March 9, 2010

    this is real talent..keep it up ma gurl

  12. abi
    March 9, 2010

    Aye yow sis dis is
    A wrap….the best poem case closed…real vibe thru experience..

  13. Roots
    March 9, 2010

    Great symbolism and creative flair, to capture an undesirable state of mind.

  14. March 8, 2010

    trust me am touch by this piece rite there ……….its takes a talented person 2 sit an write it……big up 2 the writer

  15. abraham paul
    March 6, 2010

    some thing bitter from someone sweet bram say representing for anse de mai talent we most definately got lol

  16. frenchii
    March 6, 2010

    wow……………………. Am jus loving this piece……………….sure alot of women can relate to this piece…………………………..always new my gurl was a writer…thumbs up….keep doin what ure doin….xoxoxo

  17. Nitara
    March 6, 2010

    What a pleasant supprise. I woke up this morning to this. Thanks Merrick

  18. Anonymous
    March 6, 2010

    This poem is sick..i love it, love it ,love it…you got talent my grl

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